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I would give miriam’s charater a do-over because i think she should have traded places with her sister deborah. From even the begining where deborah goes to the salon to get a hair cut i think miriam should have done that instead. The outcome of the story would be that miriam would become more popular as she changed sooner to becoming a mature person, and as for deborah she would change back to the “freak” her and miriam used to be. I think that change would have really changed the story in favor for miriam who deserves it more than her rude sister. The change may also create a new person in deborah a nicer, kind and caring person that miriam was since the begining.
I totally agree with you , i would give Miriam (the character) a do over because she should of got the hair cut in the begining of the story rather then her sister Deborah. If Miriam got the hair cut in the begining of the story ,she probably would of became a little popular. If Miriam got a do over of her life,her life would turn out much better.
Comment by Melissa M. — May 13, 2008 @ 3:20 pm
I also agree with you. She should of got her hair cut with Deborah, then maybe she would feel more included and she would be more popular and that would of helped her out alot.
Kristen Bochin
Comment by readingx08 — May 13, 2008 @ 11:17 pm
Miriam is a great person and I think she deserves a lot, but thats just how the author wrote the book.And I wish Deborah stuck up for her.
Comment by readingx08 — May 14, 2008 @ 7:34 pm