I liked how the author did not drag out the story. I found that it made it more readable for me and enjoyable. However, I felt that this made a lack of detail. So my advice for the author would be to add more detail. I felt he threw the characters at me real fast (not for real) .It made them feel less real and lovable. On top of that the ending felt a little half baked. Not that it was as much as bad, but that it felt boring and unreal. I would have gave it more structure, a more real ending. I think that he should have at least told who won the game. Then again that might have ruined the moral of the story.I think the author did a good job overall but it could have had more structure and detail.
May 13, 2008
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I agree with you. if the book was to long it would have been boring. but they could have put more detail about who won the championship game and not had thrown the characters at you rapidly. the author should have introduced the characters one at a time.
Alex N.
Comment by readingx08 — May 16, 2008 @ 1:23 am